shounenphelps | CON/CRIT (HMD)

Here's the Constructive Criticism entry (or "How's My Driving?") for Mouri Shin of the Torrent from Yoroiden Samurai Troopers. His application for

vatheon can be found here.

All comments, including anonymous ones, are screened and acceptable, although I'd much rather discuss something with someone non-anonly before it gets completely blown out of the water. We're all adults here, right?

As long as you can back up your opinions (i.e. don't just say "you suck," tell me WHY) then I will take your criticisms into account. Flames will just be ignored.

Any praise is of course always appreciated. Thank you! ♥