Mouri Shin

Here's the Constructive Criticism entry (or "How's My Driving?") for Mouri Shin of the Torrent from Yoroiden Samurai Troopers. His application for vatheon can be found here.

All comments, including anonymous ones, are screened and acceptable, although I'd much rather discuss something with someone non-anonly before it gets completely blown out of the water. We're all adults here, right?

As long as you can back up your opinions (i.e. don't just say "you suck," tell me WHY) then I will take your criticisms into account. Flames will just be ignored.

Any praise is of course always appreciated. Thank you! ♥

[[Dated for Tuesday September 27th, morning]]

I haven't been utilizing this device properly and for that I apologize.

It's been two weeks since I noticed Ran's name had disappeared from the lists, but I thought... surely... People return here, don't they? I've been witness to it.

Regardless - Ran was my friend, and I don't intend to let the kindness he showed me be forgotten. I was never able to repay him, so I resolve to be more open-minded in his honor.

I hope our spirits meet again, Ran, in this or the next life.

[The SFC clicks on to Shin looking very worried. A dark cloud is in his thought bubble, with lightning and a red torii gate.]

Excuse me, but has anyone by chance seen a small crystal sphere around, no bigger than your fist? I'm normally so careful with it, yet I seem to have misplaced it somehow... I'm willing to provide a reward of some sort. It's very important to me, you see.

Thank you.

[[OOC: He didn't actually lose it - redcloakedthief stole it from him. So if your character is the helpful sort, feel free to assume they looked around, but they can't actually find it.]]